so to be brutally honest, that feels like you’re wanking him off and it makes me pretty uneasy to read, it’s all empty platitudes that individually the words have meaning but all taken together it reads like you’re trying to convince the reader that it’s amazing rather than actually expressing that you think it’s amazing.
What are talking about? The entire thing is about how it makes me feel and how I am moved by it. To be brutally honest, I think you have reading comprehension issues.
so to be brutally honest, that feels like you’re wanking him off and it makes me pretty uneasy to read, it’s all empty platitudes that individually the words have meaning but all taken together it reads like you’re trying to convince the reader that it’s amazing rather than actually expressing that you think it’s amazing.
What are talking about? The entire thing is about how it makes me feel and how I am moved by it. To be brutally honest, I think you have reading comprehension issues.