The problem isn’t that you complain about other socialists, that’s entirely reasonable, basically every major socialist writer has done exactly that. It’s the length I see as the issue, that section is thousands of words longer than the entire communist manifesto, and that doesn’t even count the hundreds of mentions of revisionism scattered all over, particularly in the history section. Surely it could be more concise with the same message, so there’s more airtime to talk about what you bring to the table.
The Manifesto of the Communist Party was had an entire section refuting other nominal socialists.
The problem isn’t that you complain about other socialists, that’s entirely reasonable, basically every major socialist writer has done exactly that. It’s the length I see as the issue, that section is thousands of words longer than the entire communist manifesto, and that doesn’t even count the hundreds of mentions of revisionism scattered all over, particularly in the history section. Surely it could be more concise with the same message, so there’s more airtime to talk about what you bring to the table.