For me the fonts clash a bit because they are too similar but not quite. I’d suggest, if you want suggestions, using the same font for the below line. Just try and see if you like it more. I know (or guess) that you are going for a rule breaking feeling, but it’s good to follow them (like “fewer fonts is better”) and just break one or two of them, otherwise you’ll overwhelm your target. Ooorr make the below line with a font that is TOTALLY opposite to the upper one. Just to try :) Also play with the thickness of the border in the upper line letters, see how thin can you go without making it illegible/unprintable. Play a lot, show it to your friends, make polls…
For me the fonts clash a bit because they are too similar but not quite. I’d suggest, if you want suggestions, using the same font for the below line. Just try and see if you like it more. I know (or guess) that you are going for a rule breaking feeling, but it’s good to follow them (like “fewer fonts is better”) and just break one or two of them, otherwise you’ll overwhelm your target. Ooorr make the below line with a font that is TOTALLY opposite to the upper one. Just to try :) Also play with the thickness of the border in the upper line letters, see how thin can you go without making it illegible/unprintable. Play a lot, show it to your friends, make polls…