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arrow-up1252arrow-down1imageWhen you realize your laptop hasn't been plugged in for the last 4 hours you've been working...startrek.websiteIced Raktajino@startrek.website to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 9 days agomessage-square42fedilink
minus-squareAliasVortex@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up4·8 days agoNot to nitpick, but it’s only been a single page and I already feel like the author has over used the word “said”, is all the dialogue this bad?
minus-squareIced Raktajino@startrek.websiteOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·8 days agoNot really. There’s just a lot of characters in that scene (Muldoon, Hammond, Wu, Arnold, and Gennaro) all with dialog.
Not to nitpick, but it’s only been a single page and I already feel like the author has over used the word “said”, is all the dialogue this bad?
Not really. There’s just a lot of characters in that scene (Muldoon, Hammond, Wu, Arnold, and Gennaro) all with dialog.